Showing posts with label revision. Show all posts
Showing posts with label revision. Show all posts

Tuesday, October 1, 2019

Chugging Along

Yes, my dearios, it is another meeting of the Insecure Writer's Support Group!

 In their own words: 
Purpose: To share and encourage. Writers can express doubts and concerns without fear of appearing foolish or weak. Those who have been through the fire can offer assistance and guidance. It’s a safe haven for insecure writers of all kinds!
Posting: The first Wednesday of every month is officially Insecure Writer’s Support Group day. Post your thoughts on your own blog. Talk about your doubts and the fears you have conquered. Discuss your struggles and triumphs. Offer a word of encouragement for others who are struggling. Visit others in the group and connect with your fellow writer - aim for a dozen new people each time - and return comments. This group is all about connecting!

The optional question this month is

October 2 question - It's been said that the benefits of becoming a writer who does not read is that all your ideas are new and original. Everything you do is an extension of yourself, instead of a mixture of you and another author. On the other hand, how can you expect other people to want your writing, if you don't enjoy reading? What are your thoughts? 

My thoughts on this are fairly strong. Why would you even want to write if you don't read? If you don't know the magic of falling down the rabbit hole of a good book what could ever interest you in the very difficult engineering work of creating that rabbit hole yourself? I suppose if you are so aligned  with new and original ideas it would be also a good idea not to engage with any sort of discourse with other humans - or for that matter let the world in all its pain and beauty touch you at all. That's all I'm going to say as I think it is more than enough on this topic!

In other news -


I'm really having a great time working on Crooked Knife. For those of you who have dropped by for the first time, CK is a mystery I've been engaged with (and disengaged from) for a few years. I got bogged down in a swamp of my own making - the heady and sometimes inarticulate brew of a pantser. My plot got away from me and my passion for the subject clouded my judgement. Which is to say I stopped working on it for quite some time. Something shifted - I made a commitment for an outside editor to work on the problem and then realized that was a silly and expensive waste. I have still engaged the editor but promised to get her a workable finished draft with the plot holes all filled in. I have until the new year to do this which seems today as entirely workable. 

How am I doing it you may ask? Well - I've gone back to the beginning of the story and I keep teasing out the tangles. If, for instance, I find a problem in chapter five - I work it out before I go further and then I go back to make sure everything behind it (prologue to the end of four) is consistent with the changes I've made. This means a constant going over the story - slowly - like a gleaner in the field after the thresher has gone through the grain. It is pleasurable. There! I said it. Revision is pleasurable to me. Is this revision though? Yes, I would call it so. It's like a dream that I'm analyzing. I put in some clues that I know no more than the cop protagonist. I either have to figure out why that clue is there or get rid of it. Is it good grain or some weed seed? 

I am also writing the back story so I finally know what it is. Some people do this before - the plotters - but my feeling is that it is the same work whether it is front-loaded or back-loaded. And the thought of plotting like Elizabeth George - who explains her method in her book - Write Away - is death to me. I cannot know what happens in the story I'm writing because I would be bored silly if I did. I have to find it out bit by bit. And George writes a whole book before she writes a book! I do it backwards. I write the novel - then I rewrite it right. (say that five times in a row!) And don't think for a minute that I don't admire George - I love that book and much of it is very helpful to me - but not the plotter approach. 

The other thing that is working for me and giving me pleasure is that I write every day - okay, sometimes I miss a day or two, but I at least think about it daily - so I am not overwhelmed. I sort of remember what is happening. What a concept.

How about you all? How is it going at your desk? Joy or sorrow? Or a heady mix of both? I wish for you that the muse arrives and takes up a good chunk of real estate in your mind - and that you listen to him or her and give your total allegiance to what is, after all, a sane refuge - writing.



Tuesday, November 1, 2011

I did it! I did it!

What? You may well ask. I finished the edits I was working on - every bit of True has the edits suggested by my editor and has been put into third person. I did the last four chapters today. Not the last four chapters of the book - but the last ones to be touched. The tricksy pow-wow chapters. And I used my method from the Friday Challenge of a slow inquiry and gentle movement until I got them the way I wanted. I was really tempted to bull-doze but I didn't need to. I just needed to pare it down to the essential bits and I did.
So, now what? I have some largish fixes to make. I want to get rid of one of the too-many sisters of my protagonist. She may live yet but I think I can get rid of her fairly tidily now. I have already started changing another line that runs through the book involving Libby (the protag) and the man who gets her pregnant. I had it too nicey nice and I've started the work with that. And I know there's more but I will be able to do it now that I've cleaned it up as much as I have and made the pov change (though it isn't really a pov change - it is still Libby all the way -but in third not first).
Wow.
I'm going to go eat some chips and drink some wine and put my feet up. I am psyched and empty and full.
And only one day behind my schedule. Holy macaroni.

Monday, May 31, 2010

The Writing Equivalent of pre-race Carbo Loading!

this is me crossing the finish line in Dublin!
Tomorrow I begin my seven week edit and revision. Today I want to get ready for that. How might I support the writer in me? I've decided on a few ways. Today I will finish some tasks that weigh me down. I have some info to get to my tax person and I will locate it and get it away. I will clean my office - sweep - get rid of all other projects - put them away neatly - clear off my desk top - find all the bits and pieces I will need in order to be ready to roll tomorrow. I will go and buy ink for my computer as I will be printing out a compressed manuscript for the first part (single spaced, small font, double-sided). I think I'm going to try and find a comfortable reading chair for in here. I've printed off the schedule I did up the other day and will post it. I will also create a calendar with my goals on it so I can chart my progress. I will print off some pictures of my writing heroes and post them above my computer. Gather all my writing books in one easy to grab basket.

I will put in place my carrots and sticks.
Carrots
  1. finish one hour of work - take 15 minutes to weed in garden
  2. after two hours - walk dog, make a healthy snack or do some stretches.
  3. when twenty hours are done for week - take the man out for dinner or a movie.
  4. Make a huge effort to schedule clients in clumps so that I have free days to write for long stretches.
Sticks
  1. blog progress or lack of - that is a big stick, my friends.
  2. tell my non-blogging pals what I'm up to and get them to ask me about my progress. (yes, I'm completely driven by wishing to impress my friends and family!)
  3. Take my lap-top to work so I can work in between clients instead of going for coffee or snoozing!
What do you do to get ready to rock and roll on a work in progress?